Some effective people like repetitive routine, such as eating the same food, do you like this way?
Since the beginning of the 21st century, a lot of alternatives have been provided. Some people believe that adopting a repetitive routine is more effective for human life, while others argue that adopting a repetitive routine causes a negative impact on human efficiency. This essay will discuss how changing the routine is very crucial and people have to adopt a different lifestyle.
It is very important for human to change their routine life because they gain a new experience. Trying a different activity leads people to expand their background knowledge. Recent research, which was conducted in the Cambridge university, has shown that people who change their routine regularly have a more experience and knowledge than others who adopt the routine activities. Therefore, it seems clear that people have to change their habits to gain a new experience.
On the other hand, some people think that adopting a different lifestyle affect on their financial choices. They think that human brain is programmed to pay a specific amount of money on his life habits, but changing the lifestyle would make him suffer from a financial problem due to change in the schedule. But these people are unaware of the fact that adopting a single routine lifestyle will lead to people to depression. Thus, it is very important to change the routine to maintain the efficiency of human.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the reason why the human has to change his lifestyle to maintain him effective. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that adopting a different routine is essential to keep human active and free of illness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ink that adopting a different lifestyle affect on their financial choices. They think tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0936329588 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70549935244 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494382022472 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2793321542 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.615384615 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0862867892855 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373201712681 0.0925447433944 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381958818208 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598883711757 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369275125387 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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