All inventions and discoveries like the discovery of fire and electricity have impacts on our lives so much that people can no longer live without them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

From the long times ago that people were not civilized till now so many inventions have found. I believe that most of those have remarkably affected the human's life that they cannot live without them.

First and foremost, there are some fundamental discoveries including fire and wheel discovered by early humans that in modern years we still use them. Albeit, early humans just used fire for cooking and sending messages but as time passed they learned to use it in disparate ways. To clarify this point, after a while they used it for making a sword or other instruments that helped them for hunting or defending against enemy and wild animals. Furthermore, these days not only do we use fire for those purposes that our ancestors used, but also we use fire for more professional things such as melting iron and building houses. Thus it can be deduced that we cannot deny the impact of basic inventions in our life.

On the other hand, a discovery might result in a new one. A perfect example that illustrates this issue is electricity. I think that considering the world without electricity is somehow not imaginable for everyone. The result behind this is simply because electricity has caused to invent many other facilities such as TV, the computer, refrigerator, cellphone, the internet and many other things that living without them makes the life tough.

One the whole, I believe that all the inventions that are made by human facilitate our life in different ways. There are so many fruitful discoveries that we cannot live without them and should be indeed grateful for having them.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...t of those have remarkably affected the humans life that they cannot live without them...
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Line 4, column 630, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ch as melting iron and building houses. Thus it can be deduced that we cannot deny t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, while, i think, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92250922509 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53716268352 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586715867159 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0066091287 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.615384615 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255384883028 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908417211568 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624413193923 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173289811371 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569497868474 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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