All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity.
This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this
rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?
Nations worldwide are dealing with the increasing issue of obesity. This is a cause for
concern for all age groups.There are two main causes, over consumption of fast food and
lack of exercise. Possible solutions would be a government tax on fast food and special
incentives on gym membership to get people exercising.
One of the reasons that people are becoming overweight these days is that they are
eating more junk food and convenience food rather than cooking healthy meals at home.
This is because many people tend to lead a busy life so it is easier to just buy ready meals
or get a take away. For instance, In the UK, sales of these types of foods have risen by
48% since 1990. If the issue is not addressed soon, there will most likely be an epidemic
of obesity related illnesses such as diabetes in the near future.
To tackle this issue the government should take strong action. For example, increasing
tax on high fat, high sugar or unhealthy foods. Other possibilities to solve the issue would
be to add health warnings to wrapping just like on cigarette packaging. If some of these
initiatives are put into place then consumers would think twice about the foods they
consume, this could most certainly lead to them losing weight and therefore leading a
healthier life.
In conclusion, being overweight is an increasing issue for children and adults because of
the consumption of fast food and convenience foods. The government needs to look at
either taxing fast food or adding warnings to high fat food packaging
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...a cause for concern for all age groups.There are two main causes, over consumption o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57850788994 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9569294743 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978558232791 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388268241049 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355962736871 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0315089662491 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396412042986 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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