All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?
In today’s modern world, the increasingly of advancing medicine followed by health problems like asthma, obesity, and diabetes which become the most contemplated in society. Remarkably, obesity is a symptom which appears in both the young and adult people. There are a number of reasons behind this issue and several solutions should be adopted to improve this situation.
There are various reasons why people become overweight. Firstly, consuming too much processed food and eating food high in fat cause obesity. In fact, the rate of obesity in the young children is 73% the majority compared with the adult. In addition, lack of doing exercise is one of the causes of obesity. Typically, the adult with an inactive lifestyle is likely to stay at home and get away from outdoor activities. Moreover, stress partly leads to obesity disease. When an individual is stressed out, they tend to overeat to overcome their sorrow or even out of control of their eating habit.
Fortunately, there are a number of effective methods that help deal with this problem. The evidence-based tips are doing regular exercise and having a healthy diet help our body stronger and more flexible. Choosing a favorite sport is one of the best ways to practice and improve health. Eating healthy food is an essential factor to help keep our bodies from health problems. The children and adults should keep up a healthy diet and proper break-time to avoid stressors.
In conclusion, there are numerous factors leading to obesity and steps need to be taken to address this serious issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0888030888 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59840109634 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602316602317 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6789461361 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.375 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227344843693 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682542916041 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067315342698 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137726779876 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543991512774 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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