In the sophisticated era, nowadays, due to the technology is very fast. All people used their work places like businessman, engineer, schools, university and malls so on. There are plethora reason behind it. I will discuss my upcoming paragraph .
Modern world is the modern of information and technology. Today, dweller have hectic schedule in their life. They can be time spend in their work place. Hence,person have very obilgation, diligent, faithful and honest can be work in their office. Therefore, they have not a time spend in their family and we could not involve in any activities. For instance, dancing, singing and outdoor games so on. Furthermore, people can be do the job. They should be puntucal in their work and they have very determined in their work and rather than today are very touch competition another people.
Nevertheless, we are visit in the same area day by day. Dweller should can be upsurge the weight. In my veiw, they could focus on their fitness and healthy problem. Moreover, person think that exercise doesn’t necessary in their life and it is effecting on the human being life. Otherwise, they do not keep the exercise in the daily routine rathan than they might get serious diseases in the future time. Last but not the last, they will be face plethora problem in their life. They could be detrimental facts. In my opinion, exercise play an indispenable role in their life. I think any age group essential in their life because life is a golden period human being life
To put it in a put shell, I pen down saying the fact that, I think people can enjoy the work in any situation and they can be keep the exercise continue do to the life and they should be keep smile in any day. I think, people can be reduce in the weight and obesity in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70253164557 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52316241165 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509493670886 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.2817501169 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5454545455 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0896071648435 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356433325328 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339648412273 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0559464228706 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186404904692 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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