The importance of woman don't pay attention to bring up children, has always been debatable, has now upsurged a lot of argument in favor and against it, thus, it has become more controversial. The substantial influence of children's upbringing has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in an integral part of the society. It can be agreed that upside of kids upbringing is instrumental indeed, however, it has some drawbacks as well. This essay will elaborate the both assertions and provide a well-weighed conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons how woman attention is substantial for children is unreservedly salient, but most conspicuous one lies in the fact that work is equally important for woman especially when she is a single parent mother so it couldn't be justified that a mother can't do job while having children responsibilities. Working woman, for example, can work for running their home and their personal expenses. Therefore, it is a vital time for to appreciate the significance of woman attention towards their children for the overall amelioration of society.
However, there are some people who choose to think differently and hold an opposing viewpoint which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of woman responsibilities for their kids, nevertheless, the contradiction is rooted in the fact that woman should stay home with their child for their positive and healthy growth. For example, only a mother can understand their kids better but if they also want to go out and do job then who will raise their infants. Hence, it is apparent a downside of woman neglecting cannot be overlooked.
The above presented dissertation illustrates both perspectives about the impact of children growth while, it is evident that it has various benefits, although it's deleterious effects cannot be overlooked and have to well addressed and well balanced against it's merits.
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The importance of woman dont pay attention to bring up children, has...
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...hen she is a single parent mother so it couldnt be justified that a mother cant do job ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
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...o it couldnt be justified that a mother cant do job while having children responsibi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 309.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29449838188 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05174046861 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.8453412843 50.4703680194 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.727272727 104.977214359 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166590456561 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615048235873 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039197108449 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917651573002 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351464353612 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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