The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. SOme people think it would be better to our environment
In the sophisticated era,today have alots restaurant are available in the nations.They always time use transport one to onother place.I am disadvantage with this assertion.There are plethora reasons behind it.I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
Gone on the days,nowaday all person have hectic modules in their life.Hence,they always use transport system one to another place.For instance,pupil,
toddler,adoloscent and
primitive etc.I think that,they ate local food is not good the toddler.They are causing the deseases like hypertension, anxiety,cardiac,obesity and depression so on.They ate the local food.Afterthat,they could not be fitness the healthy in their life.
Nevertheless,there is no denying the fact that in my opinion, homes food is good rather than local food.They should not be involve outdoors activities participation. For instance, study,talk,
function so on. otherwise,they should be ate the homes food.They would be good the toddlers.As well as, they always time spent introvert in himself.Last but not the least,in my mind,homes food is good relate to the local food.As far as,homes food prepare is hygenice place.Therefore,Dweller ate the homes food.They should be fit and healthy.
IN summarise,after analysing that entire issue,I reckon that, according to me,the economy farmer to consumer.It is very expensive and they would not be healthy.But also,the homes food is one of the best relate to local food.Dweller should be time is very precious in their life.In my point of view,homes food is good rather than local food.I advice we ate the food homes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, i reckon, i think, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6652892562 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75956081486 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578512396694 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.699224704 49.4020404114 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 228.5 106.682146367 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.3333333333 20.7667163134 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.1666666667 7.06120827912 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 50.0 5.01903807615 996% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140440757841 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735714258917 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605351976049 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064485267142 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611262860772 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 13.0946893788 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.78 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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