All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?
Nowadays, obesity has become a serious problem, affecting both adults and children. It is commonly believed that obese people have health problems threating to their life. In this essay will be looked at the main causes of overweighting and proposed some solutions.
The primary reason of increasing obesity levels is that today people are eating too much unhealthy food. It is common these days for people to order takeaway food or pick up a ready meal on shop store. For example, in my home town, most junk food fans are adolescences which means that almost 40% of population have are threatened being obese. To tackle this issue, authorities must increase tax on junk food and make people to cook healthy food. This would encourage the youth to eat healthier meals.
Another reason is that people’s lifestyle has become less active and they hardly exercise at all. It is said that many cannot use a gym because it is much more expensive than in the past. For instance, in Tashkent the average monthly fee for per members around 300 thousand sums which means that most people cannot afford to use a gym. The problem could be addressed by spending more money on sport facilities such as gyms, that makes affordable to everyone more exercise.
All in all, obesity rate is becoming worsen and worsen influenced by unhealthy food and sedentary lifestyle. Governments should increase sales taxes on unhealthy food and increase popularity of sport in the countries as soon as possible, otherwise it will adversely impact on people’s health.
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Suggestion: been
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Suggestion:
...versely impact on people's health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02325581395 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59392401592 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2610525278 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197437056576 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698366021069 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558508732292 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120910635543 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717787902499 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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