Although environmental concerns are raised by scientists, people are not changing their lifestyle, why so? What should be done to encourage people in order to save the environment?
Since Scientists have brought many environmental issues in front of people, still people are not taking any efforts to change their liestyles. Therefore, they are harming the environment with their cruel activities. However, there are many ways that can be used to encouragefolks in order to protect the ecosystem. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the causative factors behind such behavior of folks, how they can be encouraged and will also illustrate the measures taken to resolve environmental problems .
There are plenty of reasons that reflect why masses are not paying attention towards environmental problems. First, modern lifestyles make person more lazy and sedentary. Machines and gadgets provide comfort to people by doing all the work automatically. So ,for manufacturing the electronic equipments industries are developing with a great pace. secondly, vehicles have immense contribution in this. Cars and other motor vehicles are in huge demand these days ,for instance, number of trucks ,cars, bikes run on the road for fulfilling variety of purposes. Ultimately, all these things contribute to the damage to the environment by producing massive smoke and thus leads to global warming.
To overcome such problems there is need to adopt environmental friendly ways like avoid the excessive use of automobiles and machineries, promoting recycling and segregating waste properly. However, online media can play a crucial role to promote all these things. Displaying advertisements related to environmental crises and effect of unhealthy ways of human activities can bring the change. Moreover, campaign regarding health and environment can also educate the citizens regarding environment pollution.
To conclude, unhealthy human activities like overuse of vehicles, more industrialization, deforestation etc. lead to injurious effect on environment which can be resolved by adopting environment friendly ways and providing education related to environment problems,is a fruitful aapproach to protect the environment and future generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82178217822 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19373846361 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630363036304 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2868168116 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.764705882 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199197701435 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524337094932 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467777504295 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110187998943 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575968847909 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.18 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.