Although modern life has brought with it improvements in people’s standard of living, people are not generally happy with their lives.
Do you agree or disagree?
With the proliferation of technological advancements and the consequent enhancement of the standard of living, the question of happiness has become increasingly pressing. While modern society offers a higher quality of life, a prevailing viewpoint suggests that this has led to a decrease in overall life satisfaction. I wholeheartedly concur with this perspective, as will be elucidated in the subsequent paragraphs.
One of the primary factors that contribute to a lack of life satisfaction among today's citizens is the stress and pressure intrinsic to the present era. Technological innovations, while they bring a multitude of conveniences to daily life, also serve to displace human labor in certain industries, thereby precipitating pressure to adapt to new roles or face unemployment. This, combined with the growing population resulting from increased life expectancy, creates a highly competitive labor market, trapping many in a rat race. Further exacerbated by the fear of financial instability and the future of their employment, workers are plagued by a sense of anxiety and uncertainty.
Moreover, the advent of the culture of comparison also serves to compound the problem. In this cultural milieu, people are constantly exposed to idealized versions of others' lives through various mediums, particularly social media. This creates a distorted perception of reality, as people tend to present a selective and biased representation of their lives online, which can lead to feelings of inadequacy and dissatisfaction with one's own life. The constant comparison to these curated depictions can also have a detrimental impact on mental health and well-being, as people strive to measure up to unrealistic standards. The pressure to maintain a social media persona that conforms to these societal expectations is also extremely draining, further exacerbating stress and anxiety.
In conclusion, I reiterate my total agreement with today's diminishing happiness despite the boon of improved living standards. This is mainly due to the ubiquitous comparison culture brought forth by social media and the inherent stress and pressure of the era, driving people to anxiety and stressfulness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...or market, trapping many in a rat race. Further exacerbated by the fear of financial in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66465256798 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28196253799 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598187311178 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8855891718 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.928571429 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253879205143 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761761101284 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062737446824 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148916937187 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046279262573 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.07 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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