Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
It is becoming more common for people to use the Internet as an effective way to know what is happening around the world. From my perspective, the Internet will soon replace newspapers to become the main source of information. This can be proved by analysing the flexibility and environmental friendliness that the Internet offers.
Perhaps the key reason why the role of Internet in this practice can be valued over that of newspapers is that it allows us to access faster and more adequately to all the news in the real time and wherever we are by using various electronic gadgets or mobile devices. This means that people who want to read news do not have to go outdoors to a newspapers stall or wait for the daily delivery service because all their demands for communicating the news can be resolved with the help of an Internet-connected computer. For example, if I want to know the race of American President election that just happened in 2016, I could easily find the result to be updated minutely on a wide range of websites.
Another great benefit of online news is that it does not do harm to the environment. Naturally, the traditional press, such as newspapers and magazines, consumes a great amount of papers and resources. As a result, thousands of trees are cut down exceedingly for paper-making industry to produce wood pulp, and toxic chemicals are dumped into rivers and oceans, comtaminating the aquatic environment. Online information do not have any harmful impact on their surroundings, however, which is a remarkable characteristic that encourage people switch from newspapers to Internet news.
In conclusion, I tend forwards to the idea that newspapers will lose its position as the most important tool to acquire the information since the Internet shows great advantages in terms of the convenience and unharmful effects on environment.
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- Wild animals have no place in the 21st century so protecting them is a waste of resources To what extent do you agree or disagree 53
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04193548387 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04535435419 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0639187748 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.090909091 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289483455126 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980023494731 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647342467775 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157033569047 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257468371754 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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