Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree ?
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In our time, reading online press becomes extremely popular but conventional news is still the most source information supplying news current to readers. I incline to disagree with this statement since I have faith in the likelihood of online news eclipsing the traditional newspaper in the next time.
Apparently, the information superhighway supporting people likely to retrieve the huge storage of news within a few seconds with million results from Google or any searching equipment which are available on The Internet. Moreover, the online news unfolds the possibility to upload videos and voice records that renders reach and exposure levels of news increases substantially and helps news seekers to approach the source of information effortlessly. Furthermore, there are some useful functions from the news online pages among which potential for saving the data, sharing the opinion about incidents, watching videos to understand clearly what the articles show.
Admittedly, the traditional newspaper has a crucial role providing accurate news, nevertheless, this process has to pass a series of steps towards editing, printing and distributing meanwhile online news updates the happening with only a few minutes later. Besides, the incidents at a half world away also are updated recently by news press pages that makes newspaper are more and more obsolete in this era. The online news tends to take over the position of printed news by popularity and omnipresent of this type will accelerate domination and outweigh newspaper.
On the whole, I firmly that the news online more surpass than the traditional newspaper due to the fact that some people are not approved that. Convenience, usefulness, rapidity will be essential factors contributing making the news online deserve to become the most source of news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, furthermore, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, while, as to, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44169611307 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8452186231 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8229602013 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328769217852 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141422222592 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453011485665 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212227139631 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383232857117 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.