Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
some traditionalists are are " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">of the opinion that, reading news on the internet increasingly commons, however conventional newspapers will account for the major source of news. I completely disagree with this views.
In the digital age, online news has many advantages for people. firstly, the internet is able to provide up-to-the-minute news, which leads people tp update the most recent information around the word without waiting for the editorial office. Secondly, as long as i have smart phone or laptop with me, i can connect almost instantly to the internet, surf the websites and access the huge, unlimited source of news. Finally, people who use the internet increase significantly and this trend appears set to continue. The more widespread the accessibility of the internet, the more people will come to rely on it as their main news sources.
In contrast, although newspapers has some advantages such as official, chosen information, they still have drawbacks which affect their popularity. On the one hand, the cost of newspapers can can " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">disincline people to count they as a news sources. Competing with freely available news online, newspaper publishers are facing the decline of figure. The solution to this problem is now, some newspapers have introduced online versions alongside their printed editions. Another noticeable disadvantage of newspapers is the amount of paper consumed in their production. While this this " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">may not be a major cause at the present, the environmental argument will almost certainly gain ground in the future.
In conclusion, i believe online news are surpassing newspaper to become the main source of news because of ít convenience.
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| 2019-12-06 | Bakhtiyar1 | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-06 | Bakhtiyar1 | 11 | view |
| 2019-11-24 | catngan | 78 | view |
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| 2019-08-18 | Hira Shaheen | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8803986711 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62454969821 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56146179402 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0242660355 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.428571429 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269499497084 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104009607583 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823558198558 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192911574663 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075809209411 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.