It is true that online news reading is becoming increasingly popular these days. However, it is argued that newspaper would still be the primary news source. In my opinion, this perception is rather fallacious and internet has clearly replaced newspaper as most important tool to know about the happenings around the globe.
On one hand, newspaper is widely read because of habit and inability to embrace new technology. Firstly, paper version has been around since centuries and people have become accustomed to exploring news in this form. Thus, they feel that online news reading hardly gives similar experience. Secondly, people from older age groups are not well-acquainted with intricacies of technology so, they find it easier to stick to paper version. This has been proven by a study conducted by the American journalists association which showed that more than seventy percent of subscribers of newspapers belonged to age group of over forty years while online subscription was mostly bought by younger people.
On the other hand, I do not believe these arguments live up to the scrutiny and internet has now become top method of staying updated about the world news. To begin with, online newsrooms do not hog large spaces in the house as news can be saved in smart phones so, people find them more convenient. Furthermore, tons of news channels and magazines are accessible in form of online resources just one click away making it comparatively more accessible than buying different newspapers separately. For instance, all famous media houses like CNN and BBC have developed their smart phone apps which provide their subscribers with updated news every minute. Moreover, most of these apps can be downloaded free hence, making online reading experience cost-effective.
To sum it up, while I agree newspaper is still popular commodity, most people have switched to internet because it caters to their needs better. So, it is predicted that newspaper will slowly disappear and become extinct in near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 495, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'journalists'' or 'journalist's'?
Suggestion: journalists'; journalist's
...en by a study conducted by the American journalists association which showed that more than...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21165644172 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70696961925 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60736196319 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9418702817 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.266666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318734898208 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098294122861 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373402016415 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186874748231 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243170999389 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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