In this hi-tech era, plethora of wild animals are on the edge of extinction owing to human indulge on land as well as in sea. Since, government should take some adequate steps to reduce this. This essay will evaluate both reasons as well as solutions of this vast hazard.
There are ample of factors which are responsible for this. Major cause of this aigentic issue is illegal hunting. Many individuals do illegal hunting of wild animals to export their body parts in various Nations. In this way, they are able to earn immense amount of cash. Another reason is that human activities increase temperature of earth day by day. As a consequence during the hot summer days forest catch fire easily due to which species of animals die. To examplify, according to a survey it can be manifested that near about 10,000 wild animals species extinct in the forest fire which was recently happened in America. Moreover,few rich people do hunting for their enjoyment. Because they felt inner joy by hunting.
In order to tackling such problem, following steps must be taken by the law maker. Even though high authority already enforce many laws to stop this activity, ample of masses don't follow this. Administration should not only punish those citizen but also fined them if they do hunting. Further more, parks should be construed by the law maker to save animals and also hire employes to take care of those species of animals who are place in park.
To conclude, while illegal hunting and forest fires are blamed to this issue. Not until punished hunters and build preserving parks intervene will this immense hazard be resolved.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8844765343 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38544308769 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620938628159 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0210537574 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1666666667 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179323785545 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471320513151 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684231831578 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955421945425 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731150828389 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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