The animals species are becoming extinct due to human activites on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
Many animals are dying out result from human activites on the enviorment.
This essay will look at some primary reasons of this and some possible solutions to the problem.
There are a number of reasons for endangered species. The first reason is deforestation. These deforestation nowadays are being chopped down to make way for a large industrial zone. The second reason is water pollution. These pollution causes waster from factories which lead to many marine creatures are being extincted. Another reason is illegal hunting and poaching. For example, migatory animals have to face a range of dangers such as extreme weather, food shortage and dangerous predators.
There are several actions that could be taken to mittigate the problem mentioned above. Firstly, we can take part in wildlife conservation projects. For instance, goverment can support economic to develop environmental protection programs. Secondly, security agencies must deal with the case of illegal hunting. Finally, garbage is banned from being discharge into the sea.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to dying out of wild animals and measures can be implemented to tackle this issue
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this deforestation' or 'These deforestations'?
Suggestion: This deforestation; These deforestations
...ies. The first reason is deforestation. These deforestation nowadays are being chopped down to make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45901639344 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74616125788 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693989071038 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3616329259 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.6 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138384122992 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461332019069 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476313731379 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794751564265 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517954448566 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.5 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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