It is true that the idea of working and studying through virtual sites is becoming a widespread phenomenon. Although this undoubtedly brings about numerous drawbacks, I would argue that there are far more benefits.
On the one hand, the main demerit of this trend is less direct interaction. Both employees and students may not be offered the chance to engage face-to-face with their supervisors such as teachers or employers and rely on written forms of communication. This obviously leads to negative impacts on peer support, discussion and exchanging of ideas. For example, whereas scholars on traditional courses may get better understanding by discussing the subjects outside schools, online learners tend to be restricted to chat through website, leading to lack of motivation and element of competition.
On the other hand, there are more significant advantages of this trend. First and foremost, it offers flexible way to work and learn. For both workers and students, they are free to choose the best time and location for working. Also, online services are capable of providing storage of information which can be used for later review, ensuring that they can cover the materials on their own pace. In addition, the cost-effective nature of virtual facilities may benefit various companies and schools. At company level, there is no need to pay rent for premises which constantly higher in big cities. In terms of education institutions, revenues may greatly increase given that more students can have access to a fixed course.
In conclusion, I believe that the negative sides of online working and studying could be considerably outweighed by its positive ones.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Ester Nguyễn
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ffered the chance to engage face-to-face with their supervisors such as teachers ...
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...t-effective nature of virtual facilities may benefit various companies and school...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2808988764 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89722102374 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65543071161 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8505859048 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136140816023 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465433990335 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339436590752 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867625233255 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292722578359 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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