n this day and age, thanks to the advancements in technology, it is widely acknowledged that various adults are taking use of it and making a start to work and learn from home. From my perspective, this trend has positive impacts on this society due to the following reasons.
To start with, this shift in the process of working and studying creates more opportunities for individuals. It is irrefutable that it takes considerable time and efforts of students from remote areas to collect knowledge. Therefore, when functional courses are available online, these teens can be able to approach their study and broaden their horizon in an easier way. Additionally, various white-collar workers who still embrace the thoughts of pursuing higher levels of knowledge can not possibly allocate a considerable amount of time to travel from their working place to schools. As a result, online courses become better options for them to choose.
Moreover, working and studying from home offer individuals a replacement for such unwanting situations. In terms of the Covid 19 pandemic, every activity has been abandoned and social interactions have also been cancelled. During this challenging period of time, thanks to the appearance of digital devices, everything is handled virtually and every plan is executed in due course.
In conclusion, working and studying online not only offer individuals numerous chances but also become an useful alternatives. However, people should apply this new method to one's' daily life in moderation to make a balance between reality and virtuality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, as to, in conclusion, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34136546185 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92969066107 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646586345382 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4887946222 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.833333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223980263335 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790870349214 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647470380682 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125462000797 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482743524682 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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