Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing.
Is this a positive or negative development?
People that are located in the countryside indeed disperse to the big cities. Although there are some drawbacks of declining populations in farming, I would argue that there are far more negative impacts than benefits.
The decrease in inhabitants in the rural areas would result in a lack of agricultural workforces to thrive in this field. With the development of industrialization, people have been scattering to the cities and urban places in search of work, leading to a stagnant situation in one of the most important fields in some nations. For example, in a country such as VietNam, where farming plays a crucial part in the whole economy, would get difficult in gathering enough laborers to work on farms, and this status leads to a shortage in total yields of food such as rice, vegetables which primarily consumed by residents in VietNam as well as exported to the world to bring a huge amount of profits to the economics.
Furthermore, there is an adverse impact on cities if too many people commute to this area is the abundant workers in some fields. For instance, because of industrialization, more and more people want to work in factories majoring in chemistry, etc.. and most of these majors have a slow development throughout the years, so it is unable to expand their scales to adapt to the massive number of workers these days, This redundant of labor forces would cause in the rate of unemployment in mostly big metropolises.
In conclusion, while I recognize the possible advantages of unbalanced scattering between rural and urban areas, I consider it to be a negative development overall.
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: And
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9963099631 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98716179311 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.1976581656 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.444444444 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5555555556 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27311575463 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101126119395 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470240729786 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142187276818 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138157675219 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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