Although the art plays an important role in the development of the country, many people are these days paying less attention and giving it up for other aspects. In this essay, I analyze reasons behind this view as well as give some solutions to encourage people to arouse interest in arts.
Despite the fact that the art has greatly contributed to enriching the culture, it plays little or no role in proving our lives. An example would be for this is that humans cannot admire great art creations like paintings or marvel at brilliant sculptures to live comfortably while the contribution of science and technology can be of some help. Another reason for the reduction popularity of arts is that it receives little or no financial aid from the government, which leads to lots of organizations lack finance to maintain as well as preserve and develop arts. Although, the national body still supports arts and artists, no special incentives is given to produce a masterpieces of arts.
It is true that the art plays in vital role in enriching our culture and it seems to be of paramount importance. Therefore, it is essential of the national state to allocate appropriate budget in preserving and developing arts in forms of museum, organizing exhibitions and cultural programs. Furthermore, the government should take a responsibility to create more jobs in this sector by opening more and more art galleries, craft exhibitions as well as provide organizations with financial support to maintain and preserve arts and those who have got genuine talents in arts.
In conclusion, some major reasons why people lose their interest in arts can be identified and some simple solutions should be adopted to encourage people to preserve as well as develop and maintain arts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 669, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a masterpiece' or simply 'masterpieces'?
Suggestion: a masterpiece; masterpieces
... special incentives is given to produce a masterpieces of arts. It is true that the art plays...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03741496599 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86368097086 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1042224776 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.1 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207900926244 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860639579413 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396589563931 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133840450658 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200218904514 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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