The availability of unhealthy food, such as fast food and junk food, has become more widespread in recent years. What are some of the problems associated with this development and what action can be taken to solve them?
A common issue usually associated with the rapid-changing modern world of ours is the consumption of unhealthy food, which has become more and more accessible due to its low cost and convenience. What people often seem to overlook is the fact that these foods pose significant threats to our society individually and collectively. Therefore, I will discuss the problems as well as suggest methods to reduce or effectively resolve them in the following essay.
To begin with, unhealthy food has the reputation of deteriorating one’s body. With today’s technological advances, food can be mass-produced and manufactured. This, however, does not guarantee the quality of such nourishment. Rather, the decline of nutritional values and the increase in fat, sugar, and artificial additives are common themes often seen in snack food. Those who indulge themselves in such detrimental substances can run the risk of permanently damaging their health and developing diseases like obesity and high blood pressure. Another issue is that fast food companies are taking over the market while simultaneously forcing the locals to go out of business. These so-called restaurants are corporate-owned, so their brand names are enough to persuade customers. Moreover, they seem to be set up in every country, every state, and every district, leaving no space for local business to flourish. Hence, the problems that unhealthy food in general poses to our society are undeniable.
With that in mind, I present a few logical methods to combat the negative impact of the aforementioned issue. Firstly, there should be campaigns brought about by the government to influence how people perceive their eating habits. These ought to focus on the benefits of consuming healthy and clean products. Secondly, the people are also responsible for the rise of fast food companies. Hence, a shift in the mind of the general public regarding supporting local businesses should be brought about. Furthermore, only when the cost of clean-eating is reduced to a reasonable price can people enjoy such luxury instead of junk food. These are just some ways to minimize the effects and drawbacks that processed food brings about.
In conclusion, with the disastrous consequences of unhealthy food, it remains an arduous task for our generations and those before and after us to resolve. However, I believe that it is in our best interest to come together to tackle this issue, for the sake of eating cleaner and safer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...nies. Hence, a shift in the mind of the general public regarding supporting local businesses s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in general, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27204030227 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95934292316 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609571788413 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.917818373 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342219760118 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875996682361 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639720878035 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183239015234 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602364162447 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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