The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The people health standard are the key to being productive and active. Some believe that people's health standard will dropped in near future than in present. However, I totally disagree with the statement. This essay is to talk about the health standards of the people of today and future.
Nowadays, people undertand value of being healthy and know various exercises and yogas which could help them to be healthier. Many influencers and content creator are constanly marketing their excerise videos while people are following them and getting enough knowledge to be in shape and have a healthy life. Almost everybody has a internet facilities which help them to compare one content to another and choose the best one which would be benificial interms of finacially and physically. Through internet healthier and relevent contents will reach to almost every people about being healthy which would help them to get a desireable body and have a sound health whether it's physically, mentally or spritually.
New technological advancement and various medicine is been developing to create a solution to every problems related to health. Scientist are able to cure different types of diseases which would had killed many people back then in the past due to lack of people awareness and lack of medicine. As for now, Hospitals, Clinics and doctors are all around the world to treat the patient and people are also aware about certain methods and medicine to cure any health issues. Simple problems which could kill the person who suffered from diarea in the past now its not a issues anymore because he/she could just get a tablet of diarea from near clinic and treat it without any major concequences. In the near future, scientist will be able to make a solid cure of major health problem like cancer, aids which would save many lives.
The average standard of people's health will reach to a point in near future where people will not fall ill and die with simple diseases. Standard of health will be increased in great way when people are aware in present generation which will enchance the future in better way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'drop'
Suggestion: drop
...lieve that peoples health standard will dropped in near future than in present. However...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ve a healthy life. Almost everybody has a internet facilities which help them to ...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...y problems related to health. Scientist are able to cure different types of disease...
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Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...red from diarea in the past now its not a issues anymore because he/she could jus...
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Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a issue' or simply 'issues'?
Suggestion: a issue; issues
...red from diarea in the past now its not a issues anymore because he/she could just get a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96901408451 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43189479199 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529577464789 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6542089948 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267339642953 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11128980343 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072154626938 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194714880633 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115760978421 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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