The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Experts are forecast that an average standard of people's health in future will be lower than today. I agree with this. Each day Earth environment getting more polluted and food and clean water supply getting low.
We begun with food and water ,Food is one of most importan think in our live.Our quality of life depen on food quality but resent study of food show us that food become poluted by cyntetic ingredients like antibiotic and pesticide and other harmful stuff.That all have negative effects to our health.
Each day usage of antibiotic and pesticide are rising up, and all that synthetic elements pollute our body.
Water is most importan fluid on entire planet we made by 80% water. Clean water in near future can become luxuruty for even richest country in the world.Water quality equals people's health if water poluted our health is suffering dramaticaly.
Air polution is third componet to decrising people's health.
Most dangerous think happening today it is news stapms of bacteria who resistent to most antibiotic this may cause not just lower standard of people's health in future ,but total dead of entire human kind.Overpopulation and overconsuption of antibiotic, may it hapen. Even now is more that 40 stapms of super bacteriya exist this super bacteriyas kill 100-200 people each month in USA.
Other reason that in future will be lower than today is automatization of industry wich hapening today.Many people lose they jobs in near future adm, it lead to unemployment level rise very hight without icome people can not buy med services drugs they need and it couse increase of death rate.
In conclusion,even today we can see that people's health in future will suffer from many things from wate,air,soil polution, poor food and new bacterias.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, third, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11262798635 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65797788109 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587030716724 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.8611196032 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.833333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22835488918 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102376604698 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996519989605 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102658107228 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788671320109 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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