Over the past few decades, societies at large witnessed tremendous growth and revolutionary changes, that has been corner stone of the multifaceted progress. It may not be hyperbole to say that, health has been a core element and an inviolable subset of the matrix of progress. In this context, an issue that has become a fixture of any discussion pertains to extent to which the health of people will decrease in the future. This essay shall analyse this issue from every angle and argue that, the people will be unhealthier in future than they used to be in the past.
A quick perusal on this topic at hand would throw up a surfeit of seminal reasons supporting some people's perspective that, the people become healthier in future. Firstly, the technology will be found some techniques which helps everybody to get stronger and make them live longer. The proponents of this view also feel that, in future, doctors and scientist will combine their knowledge together and enhance our medical field ,which will lead to vanish some non-curable diseases from the world.And also will find different medicines to treat many diseases,which do not have a solution now.
However, if we are honest about this statements, we might acknowledge that the aforementioned reasons are intensely insensitive and only showcases the intellectual bankruptcy of our current existence.
In my arsenal of arguments supporting the perspective that the average health standard of people will be decrease in future, most potent is that, as technology enhances, the people become more lazy. nowadays the people are not conscious about their heath rather than their beautiful. It leads to get died in an early age. I also feel that, people get affected by some diseases like diabetics and cancer in their childhood. It is mostly because of their worst food habit. Even though people are aware about the consequences of having fast foods, they are demanding for this kind of food because of their busy schedule.
Having considering both sides it seem ever so sensible to register my agreement with the statement that people's health standard will definitely be lower than the present state. Inspite of the intricate tapestry of arguments delicately woven against the statement seems unconvincing to my psyche on a subtextual basis. Suffice it to say that people become more unhealthy in future.
- The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 73
- Full time university students spend most of the time in studying. They should do other activities too. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12628865979 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71886939196 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.413674532 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8235294118 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194933568689 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594648429565 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497063188108 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101785652415 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384438645803 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.