It is the case that in the presence of children’s long duration spent indoors, as a result, it hinders in limited experience to be equipped, which is regarded as a drawback to the majority of children. In the essay, I will describe how lack of exposure in the world is infavorable.
Staying long indoors can have a detrimental impact on children in learning workplace. Most often, they do not acquire knowhow in the processing in workplace with limited communication. As they grow up, the way on getting used to work is hindered. Since they are equipped with inadequate potentials and work with lack of experience gained, they will be regarded as incapable and unproductive to survive in nature.
Another negative effect on children is that they might find hard to communicate with others. They may fear their words will be twisted and used against them. As they were isolated from society from a long while and learnt little about interpersonal relationships, how one another get along and so on. They are used to communicate with friends in the internet social chat groups, lack of face-to-face conversations and fail to look into people’s true character. As they speak they fear in looking into others’ eyes and they might hurt others’ feelings. They would simply shut down and become isolated in society in a long term.
In summary, children getting in touch with the outside world is something should not be neglected. Thus, the negative effects on them can be disastrous, in terms of future work experience as well as social barrier.
- Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. Discuss the effects lack of experience with and understanding of nature can have on children as they grow up. 61
- Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them? 78
- Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion. 56
- Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society Describe the advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion 78
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.others,however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to communicating'.
Suggestion: used to communicating
...e another get along and so on. They are used to communicate with friends in the internet social cha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, so, thus, well, while, in summary, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94759705563 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6759241417 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7857142857 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256861477379 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907082537367 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433833876472 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159090484041 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486416561529 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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