Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or more problems?
It is claimed that being a famous person could get many advantages in their life as well as the challenge that could happen whenever. While it is undeniable that there are clear financial benefits for anyone well known, I believe that they could face many problems in their life.
Firstly, there are a lot of people who think that they can earn so much money and have great wealth from being a celebrity. Therefore, they can buy whatever they want and get a lot of expensive items. Moreover, the media shows us their enviable lifestyle such as cars. mansions and clothes. However, they have to spend a lot on their management and investment in looks. For example, in many reality shows, famous vocalists admitted that sometimes they have to invest huge money for their MV or for their appearance to keep the image for their fans. As a result, they dept on a belt and they could share with anyone.
Secondly, people said that they could enjoy living a life of luxury and living in the love of their fans. So that, they could go where they want, attend the best events and receive a lot of gifts from their followers or big brands. Nevertheless, with great influence, they could be faced with little privacy because paparazzi follow them everywhere. Moreover, that negatively impacts their family and their relationships, so they can not eat in a restaurant or go shopping because the press would scrutinize their life. Sometimes, they even write false facts to attract viewers and put pressure on those around them.
In conclusion, although the money and popularity they achieve from their profession make them get financial benefits, I think that they come at a very high price: loss of freedom, privacy, and relationships. Personally, there are more problems than advantages they receive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Mansions
... their enviable lifestyle such as cars. mansions and clothes. However, they have to spen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87868852459 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53431382696 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554098360656 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3256256562 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0854880385377 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366972898211 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519991804165 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737367793678 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560823891491 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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