Being a celebrity such as famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits do you think that being a celebrity bring more benefits or more problems
undoubtedly, being a renowned person in movies and sports has multiple plus points as well as negatives. from my vantage point of view, a famous personality has to face troubles similarly getting benefits too. Both sides are enlightened in furthur paragraphs.
Pointing toward merits of being a celebrity and major one is having name and fame worldwide. due to this they can become motivated figures for ordinary people who follow them. so they can promote goodness in society. the paragon of this statement is filmstar amitabh bachan who always promote saving and educating girl child in india through advertising and shows. Despite this, having luxurious life is also a golden benefit of being a sports and film figure as a impact of their reputation it is untroubled for them to get their work done instead of rank and file.
Secondly having a glance at negatives of being famed persons, first is press and media seek chances to reveal their personal life in public. So they do not have privacy which sometimes make them embarrassed. Moreover, their single mistakes bevbecome rumours in people as a result affect their work and reputation as well. as a epitome, rumours of virat kohli and anushka sharma. rather than this, to be a reputed person they make day and night one and lead a hard life.
Lastly, it is crystal clear that living life as public figures is both tough and beneficial. so one solution is not to face hurdles is to balance their personal and professional life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, as to, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87747035573 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54259284797 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620553359684 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0569594453 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152639192693 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472780208063 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513529228656 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907530645956 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506049564854 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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