The best way to ensure the growth of children is tomake parents take parenting courses. Do you agree or disagree?
The general view has been that parents should be made to take parenting courses in order to guarantee the best development of their children. Although these courses can be useful, especially for first-time parents, I disagree that they should be mandated. with this idea and the reasons will be outlined in this essay.
First of all, despite preparation for each growth stage of the children from parenting classes, parents instinctively know how to hold and care for their child as soon as it is born. That means they are aware of what is good and bad for the kids. In fact, there is no ideal method of raising a baby due to the differences in the families' situations. Furthermore, either the circumstance or the child is analysed by experts however, only parents can understand them, because specialists never truly grasp their individual characteristics, compared to their mothers and fathers.
In addition, instead of following something bringing about a business model in to the relationship between parents and children, parents can learn how to natuarally bring up a kid. That mothers and fathers spend time with their kids is significantly better than participating in these kind of classes. In particular, some people have experiences in parenting based on their own upbringing and cultural influence. As a result, people should be free to attend parenting courses rather than forcing them to do so.
In conclusion, although it can not be denied that there are advantages of parenting classes, as far as I concerned it should be up to the parents to make their decisions to enroll in such cources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
... disagree that they should be mandated. with this idea and the reasons will be outli...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...nificantly better than participating in these kind of classes. In particular, some people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05243445693 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90162360512 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4865218537 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.416666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258595083784 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917870210879 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907584105756 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156533246837 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036693266022 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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