The best way to improve health is to do regular exercise. To what extended do you agree or disagree?
The most effective method of developing and improving health is considered as daily exercise. I partially agree with this statement because exercise is the key to health. However, diet also plays an essential role.
To keep oneself heathy it is very important to exercise on daily basis. There are numerous benefits of exercising. People who are suffering from cardiovascular diseases advised by their doctors to do exercise. By doing exercise the excess fat deposited in their bodies get diminished. People with obesity can also reduce the weight and fat with exercise. The more people do exercise the more calories they would burn. For example, many working people with hectic schedule did not have enough time for exercise as a result of which they can suffer from many diseases.
In one side, if exercise contributes the most significant role in improving health, another factor diet cannot be denied. A healthy diet is mandatory for a person to improve health. Our body needs different type of vitamins, nutrients,carbohydrates to maintain balance. A person can intake green vegetables, cereals, pulses and a balanced diet lead to a healthy life. For instance, children nowadays prefer eating junk food because of which they have problems like obesity, high cholesterol.
In conclusion exercise on the daily basis is the better approach to keep oneself healthy as exercise is a most significant factor whereas healthy diet is also equally crucial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27467811159 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89767914367 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605150214592 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5595890724 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8125 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5625 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180612814979 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609597532798 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572322710084 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104079905984 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358438290311 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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