Nowadays, as women and men have to work full time, household duties (such as taking care children) should be equally divided. Do you agree or disagree?
In light of the mounting importance of gender equality, not only do men but also women contribute their full time for occupation, the question of whether or not household activities should be handled equally has been a topic of public interest lately. One common proposal that many people, myself included, advocated is that it is fair to divide domestic responsibilities similarly between both genders.
Opponents of dividing equally between husbands and wives often cite the fact that household chores are inherently women’s responsibility, which has been recognized since ancient times. Nonetheless, this thinking fails to factor in that the wife would be overwhelmed when she works all day like her husband and takes care of family on her own, as evidenced by the fact that numerous women are falling into the deadlock or suffering from depression. That being the case, the family atmosphere would be affected negatively. This is why couples should distribute household duties equitably in order to increase mutual understanding.
What is more, a fair division of housework not only helps reduce stress and anxiety but also provides couples more time to focus on their offspring. Through the interaction with parents, it is beneficial for children's well-rounded development. Therefore, if the burden of all tasks falls on one person’s shoulder, disagreements and arguments could arise that have detrimental effects on children’s psychology. This can be seen in some Asian families, where the majority of people are influenced by the concept of gender prejudice, children will also be deeply impacted by this mindset, making gender inequality becoming increasingly severe. This is a testament to the importance of both sexes having equal roles in the family in building a just and civilized society.
In a nutshell, I strongly support the belief that home management should be shared effectively among men and women, considering its positive influence on family environment and descendant’s development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... do men but also women contribute their full time for occupation, the question of whether...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...tribute their full time for occupation, the question of whether or not household activities should be h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nonetheless, similarly, so, therefore, well, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47435897436 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04094888994 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650641025641 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1852083623 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282638605422 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083639020551 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522094190645 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151922924365 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454419797662 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.