The best way to solve world's environmental problem is increase the cost of fuel.
Do you agree or disagree and give your own opinion?
It is sometimes argued that should government increase the price of fuel to battle against climate change. Personally, I think that it would be ineffective if we implemented this change without considering carefully.
On the one hand, there are some immediate effects that will be beneficial for the people and the environment. By rising petroleum’s value, people will be reluctant when they want to use their private vehicles. Since cars and other means of transport released into the atmosphere tons of greenhouse gases every year, cutting down the use of them would have positive impacts on our lives. First, the quality of air will be improved and the number of people having respiratory problems like Asthma would be reduced significantly. Second, because people have to look for others types of transport, public transportation would be their first priority due to low price and its convenience. Therefore, we also tackle the problem of traffic congestion during rush hours in many spots and reduce the amount of time people commuting every day.
On the other hand, people will have problem in adapting this sudden change in their regular basis. Some people, for example: taxi drivers, earn a living by transporting customers. When the authority increase the price of fuel, they will not be able to make ends meet and become unemployed. In addition, I think transportation is not only the main contributor to air pollution. If we do not have the appropriate approach to such issues like the cutting down of trees, the lack of regulation in controlling toxic gasses emitted from factories, the situation might be worsened.
In conclusion, while heightening the cost of fuel may have some positive effects but only on a certain extent. In my opinion, dealing with such a big problem like climate change requires the combination of many measures that can only show greatest effectiveness when they are used together
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 234, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'show the greatest'.
Suggestion: show the greatest
...bination of many measures that can only show greatest effectiveness when they are used togeth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14331210191 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85233178015 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595541401274 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9599135519 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0838741049429 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302558957117 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264286975507 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574933839853 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162614734687 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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