Working in a multinational company provides numerous benefits and opportunities for people. I disagree with the given notion that working with multinationals companies is the way to learn about other cultures.
To commence with, the best way to learn about the other culture is to live in a particular country and get real experience from the masses. Live in foreign countries offers a myriad of advantages for every individual. Moreover, people can explore new things and make good relationships with other citizens of the country. Students who want to study abroad are also the best way to obtain real indulgent experience and knowledge about the other culture. Furthermore, we can work with them and exchange ideas with each other, and learn something new in our life.
Additionally, people can get hitched with each other and know very well about their culture. Studying at an overseas college and the university are also a pleasurable experience for international students as they can learn more about the history of the country and the lifestyle of their ancestors. Besides, an individual can get good jobs in foreign countries and get settled well to know about their culture. To epitome, one can study overseas and earn a degree from the University and get a marvelous job in the future. However, work with multinational corporations gives you the experience to learn more about the company's culture but not of a country.
To recapitulate, I reiterate to say that to learn more about the culture of other countries, people should go abroad and learn more about their culture rather than working in multinationals organizations in his or her nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92317098939 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485294117647 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5824553353 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197740054461 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856258165895 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647980672275 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149431263134 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597820936687 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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