It is irrefutable to say that traveling by car is much safer and convenient way of transportation. I believe that traveling by cycle provides enormous benefits to the health and it enhance quality of life too. This essay will discuss both the aforementioned view in the subsequent paragraphs.
On the one hand, traveling by car offers safety and reliable journey in the city. Nonetheless, in metropolitan such as Mumbai, Delhi and Ahmedabad it is very hard to drive car on the road due to plenty of traffic. Besides, car protect people from hars sunlight and unstoppable rain fall. In addition to this, we can bring our family with us in car and masses can enjoy journey together. Nevertheless, cars produced great amount of carbon emissions which has hazardous effect of the environment.
According to the research of a university, every year car produced huge amount of carbon in the atmosphere which has negative impact of flora and fauna.
On the other hand, driving bicycle is necessary? Certainly yes. driving a bicycle not only offers health benefits, but also eco-friendly mode of transportation. Thus, it is really crucial for civilisation to ride a bicycle rathan than car. Doctor of numerous countries also suggest that riding a bicycle for 30 minutes enhance cardio vascular system significantly. Government is encouraging to the citizen to drive cycle, and they also built long separate raods for cycle.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that car provides plethora of benefits in order to drive with safety in the city, however, cycle offers enormous health and environment benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
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Suggestion: Driving
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, really, so, thus, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16475095785 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96969223077 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7768426917 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133515322868 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448219378551 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290988038002 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065850107627 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378629547655 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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