Big salary is more important than job satisfaction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that a high salary is more crucial than job satisfaction while others say that salary is of the same importance as job satisfaction. Although the first opinion may be true to a certain extent, I would argue that job satisfaction and salary are equally vital.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some individuals say that a high wage is important. First, a big salary may be one of the factors determining productivity. If people received a great amount of money thanks to their effort put into work, they would develop a sense of accomplishment, thus working harder and increase their work efficiency. Second, a highly remunerative job could guarantee a convenient life. People can not only allocate their remuneration to pay for daily payment but also spend their wages on recreational activities, which would help improve their living standards. For instance, individuals who are highly paid usually utilize their salary by traveling, which could alleviate stress and broaden their horizons thus improve their life.
On the other hand, I believe that job satisfaction is as necessary as a high salary. Lack of job satisfaction could attribute to a decrease in productivity at work. If people have no passion for their job, they would consider going to work as a burden, which is arduous and stressful. Therefore, they would be prone to suffering from stress, thus working with little efficiency. In addition, people who find no satisfaction in their job may have a tendency to pursue other occupations. As a consequence, they may not put all of their effort into their main jobs, which could lead to a decline in their wage and a rise in pressure they may feel at work. This is a statement that only when people find satisfaction in their work can individuals work productively, thus increasing enthusiasm for their job and their salary.
In conclusion, I am convinced that the passion and the satisfaction people receive from their job is no less vital than the high remuneration individuals can be offered from their occupation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03206997085 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97658358008 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481049562682 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2920925676 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150505199194 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715746645449 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806078498319 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138088323601 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115809267528 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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