Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
Provide relevant examples if necessary.
The phenomenon of work-life balance has always been of high importance since the first labor relationships were formed. In this regard an opinion exists that wages received at work should dominate an employees' phycological condition. I completely disagree to the above mentioned point of view due to the reasons marked hereinafter.
First of all, bad atmosphere at work ruins humans' health in long -term and may create negative biological and chemical alterations in the body. If a person is under constant stress, they begin to experience problems with the central nervous system and their general condition is disturbed. Besides that, the issues related to well-being can lead to serious illnesses and knock individuals out of their usual daily routine. For instance, according to the magazine “Staroslavyansk time” 35 percent of office workers experience constant stress and they are prone to stroke at an early age. Thus, everyday stress is the main trigger that causes a serious impact on the body and initiates severe consequences.
Moreover, I would like to add that a bad mood caused by work can also negatively affect the bonds between family members. A married couple quarrels more often and their everyday life turns into toxic clarification of empty conversations. In principle, such BATTLES do not lead to anything good and destroy the internal balance of lovers. For example, my friend Alfred told me that recently he had survived a big fight with his wife because of her boss, who constantly loaded her with reports at work. Hence ,difficult working conditions will constantly interfere with family life leaving their mark on the future.
To conclude, choosing the optimal comfortable mental balance plays an important role in the health of a person and those around him. Сonstantly arising troubles at work causeS irreparable damage to a human's loved ones and serve as a ground for quarrels.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24350649351 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81895225569 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.6620333525 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0410794962132 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0138902082924 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0174092652491 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0258371258633 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01631647823 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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