The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years .by 2030 it is estimated that over the one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over.
What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? What can be done now to deal with this situation?
The theory of rapid decline in developed countries is a very vital matter that needs immediate attention, if these studies prove to be true it will have many damaging consequences on these countries this essay will discuss two of the most affecting consequences.
Economy is one of the most crucial matters for every country in the world. Countries economy depends on it’s various industries and these industries can easily be affected by population aging. Factories always need young engineers to have the best profitability and companies always need fresh minded managers with the latest updates in management.
Developed countries place great importance for science and the scientific community is one of the most essential pillars in society.as society ages the incentive to acquire science and knowledge decreases.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that aging population is serious topic that requires every country’s attention and in my opinion the only thing that we can do to avoid this situation is to inform people about the devastating consequences of population aging. And government should try to lower the costs of living for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32795698925 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90909899757 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3031784483 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.571428571 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226325139852 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949556156663 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739025611294 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132927251438 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577012558695 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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