Governments spend millions of dollars each year on their space programs most recently Mars is the focus of science's attention some people think this money would be better spent on dealing with problems closer to home. Do you agree or disagree?
These days governments put a lot of budget and effort on astronautics and other space programs. In spite of the considerable amount of literatures and achievements in this field, many still consider these expenses as an unnecessary waste of money. They prefer these expenses should have spent on people's daily problems. This essay will examine this particular conflict.
The importance of knowledge and science and its affect on developed countries is an undeniable fact. Science helped generations to live healthier and longer , build factories and plains , develop their traditionally farming methods therefore having a better life. One of the most vital majors in science is astronomy. A few ages ago astronomy told us that the earth isn't flat and since then it has been helping people to have a better understanding of the universe we live in . Nowadays scientists are researching about the possibility of life on other planets specially Mars and if they succeed humanity may have another option to live . So it is not logical to cut down the budget that can change the destiny of us .
These days people are struggling with a lot of difficulties. The quality of education, health care, security and even city facilities can affect their daily life. They expect their government to provide them with the basic necessities af their lives. For example jobs, a suitable house and a bright future for them and their children. Therefore, it makes sense if they expect their government to prioritize their quality of life instead of late return investments.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that all these things are important for the people and their future therefore, the government should allocate equal resources for both.
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- The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years .by 2030 it is estimated that over the one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over.What effects will these predictions hav 56
- Governments spend millions of dollars each year on their space programs most recently Mars is the focus of science's attention some people think this money would be better spent on dealing with problems closer to home. Do you agree or disagree? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09473684211 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80936306101 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0003255196 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157577689308 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509217813147 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259359653903 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873670091937 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199803275611 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.