Blood sport have become a hot topic for debate in recent year as society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilised activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed

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Blood sport have become a hot topic for debate in recent year as society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilised activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed

In the modern,society people are developed and also they are more educated or most of people are aggressive in nature, so they play are uncivilized activity with other man and animals . The given topic assert that why blood sport should be banned in the country? In my opinion , i will expore the some point of view regarding this topic why it is starting? Or why it is banned? In upcoming paragraph.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , society
In the modern,society people are developed and also they are ...
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Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...oped and also they are more educated or most of people are aggressive in nature, so they play ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ized activity with other man and animals . The given topic assert that why blood s...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... be banned in the country? In my opinion , i will expore the some point of view re...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... banned in the country? In my opinion , i will expore the some point of view rega...
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Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ntry? In my opinion , i will expore the some point of view regarding this topic why ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 41.998997996 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 328.0 1615.20841683 20% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 71.0 315.596192385 22% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61971830986 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.90278310819 4.20363070211 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65414273068 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 53.0 176.041082164 30% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.746478873239 0.561755894193 133% => OK
syllable_count: 110.7 506.74238477 22% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.2839945591 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12913773389 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494975566905 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491302367149 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12913773389 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 78.4519038076 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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