The table below gives information on the Internet use in six categories by a age group . Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.

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The table below gives information on the Internet use in six categories by a age group . Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.

The given tabular chart depicts the information about the internet use in six categories by a age groups. The data is calibrated in percentum . It is clearly and coherently represented.
Having a quick glance upon the table chart , majority of teens group use the Internet for get news and online games activities that is 76% or 80%. Where as 20s to 70+ age group activities in both categories are increasing steadily . Moving further, more than half teenagers like to do suffering on the Internet for download to apps and other documents but according to the age group the download activities will has been descreased.
It can be seen that , teens do not liked the product research. However 20s to 40 s year old people lik this activities that is 79% , 80% or 83% respectively. Noticeable, buying a product are famous in middle age people that is around the 68% ,and teens age group minor like searching for people ,but it is also not popular in all group people.
Overall, it is evident that teenagers most do the get news or online games activities ,and product research activities popular in adult people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80104712042 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68661571467 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591623036649 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.3010128819 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204301735696 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759622214821 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935013375847 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119399679225 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925832372478 0.0819641961636 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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