Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate yhe recent years. A society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to helpless animals there are killed Blood sports should be banned. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
Killing animals for the sports are popular in modern society and it become a debatable tpoic today because blood sports involve killing of animals which is considered as unethical human activity. In my opinion all blood sports like bullfighting, cockfighting and soon should be banned as well as it is possible by making stringent laws and punishments.
To commance with, the main point of such event is attract and create a new auditory so make a breakthrough along other popular sports by providing unusual programe.Secondly, blood sports create a significant problem such as psychological aspect about the relationship between people and animals as well as this sports damage the body the animals.In addition of this, individual used animal as a tool for entertainment and gaining money from it is considered as an uncivilized activity whereas animals are invulnerable, they do have life and emotions.
However, this sports is totally against of law because while playing animals should be sick and they faced different type of diseases. So, they risk their life in diong. Furthermore, in ancient times blood sports are a part of culture and in several states these activities should be conducting during festival times. For instance, bullfighting are commom in some communities and citizens are likely to participate in such games to show their courage and make feel of excitement among people.
To conclude, blood sports should banned by laws and punishments because animals are also part of environment and they also havethe right to live. So, it is our responsibility to make the world more eco-friendly and keep all creatures safe.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24621212121 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9837691288 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.655926397 49.4020404114 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.888888889 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2222222222 7.06120827912 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299525618232 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115894688293 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920608707272 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185294781227 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757829929771 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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