bringing in foreign workers to fill positions that domestic workers are unwilling to do can cause problems
it is quite an interesting and debatable whether to bring foreign workers to fill positions or not.
Nowadays, successful organisations focus more on talent and skills of a person while hiring for a suitable job rather than recruiting a domestic worker who does not know or have no experience of particular work, which ultimately leads organisations to be successful.
Work demands some of the key factors to be fulfilled to get plans to fruition, like capability, enthusiasm, responsibility, and sensibility, and the organisations are always usually in search of the ones’ who are aficionados, skilled and optimist. It is a fact that when organisations of such countries grow higher, the nations ultimately create their name around the globe but despite of this there are some of the problems while recruiting foreigners in vacant positions.
Undeniably, employing foreigners creates a language barrier which is difficult for most of the persons to get through, and this barrier creates understanding problems.
However, scrutiny and recruiting should purely be done on equity and merit basis keeping merits of the job in mind that fits the individuals’ aptitude accordingly. For instance, Thai people are known to be the best masseuse in the world and easily get jobs in spa.
Similarly, Japan’s electronics are considered best in technology almost all over the world, and it is not necessarily that their master minds are Japanese in fact their workers belong to different countries.
While concluding, in my opinion one should be skilled enough and self-assured that no one other could substitute him/her.
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| 2020-04-18 | Waseem Akhtar | 73 | view |
- should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things like food and education or it is the responsibility of the government of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves 73
- young people should go to university to further their education 73
- bringing in foreign workers to fill positions that domestic workers are unwilling to do can cause problems 73
- power of advertisement reflects the sale of consumer goods 61
- in many countries a small number of people earn extremely high salaries some people believe that this is good for the country but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, similarly, so, thus, while, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37647058824 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1191388711 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619607843137 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4594996512 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.333333333 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137156634381 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618834391648 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985735841246 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766880035445 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106063167057 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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