The provided charts reveal Japan's population, where the first one illustrates the growth of people's number meanwhile table chart exposes the data of elder people over 65 years old during 1950 and 2055.
Generally speaking, at the first glimpse, it is acknowledgeable that both graphs illustrate an increase from the mid 20th century to the days we currently live in.
With regards to the trend of expansion of Japanese people, citizens of the mainland have observed a substantial growth from the 1950s to nowadays. In the beginning, 84.1 million people have lived in Japan, and since then approximately 4-6 million people have been adding up each half-decade. 25 years later, has had a sharp increase because, in 1975, 7 million people added to the population. However, in our present days, 2015 precisely, people of Japan went through the first decrease in the given period, roughly 2 million Japanese citizens diminished. It is estimated that in the soon future, Japan will experience an abrupt decrease to 89.9 in the mid 21st century.
According to the table, in 1950 it was recorded that about 4.1 million or 4.9% of old people have existed on the Japanese Island. At the beginning of the 21st century, the number of people aged 65 years multiplied by five. It is projected that in 2035 and 2055, the percentage of elder citizens will only grow, leveling out to 36.5 million in 2055.
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- Task 2 Writing Academic and General Training You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Some young people believe it s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults while others wish to live in their homet 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94893617021 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64136403847 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0715303775 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.3 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0582063411883 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0224432666011 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329156525074 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0401299851673 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043271998395 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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