Nowadays, in parallel with the outbreaks of technical platforms, many corporations prioritize launching and selling their products on the internet, thus, online purchasing is promoting and increasing rampantly. Apparently, this phenomenon has its own merits as well as drawbacks, however, the benefits of online shopping are seemed to surpass the disadvantages.
At the starting point, when it comes to the advantages of online shopping, most people might immediately think about its convenience. Absolutely, online shopping means that you only need a technical device for joining the social shopping network, and all the bargaining process is operated virtually, without squandering time for commuting to stores or searching for suitable commodities. Therefore, if customers do not drive to shopping malls for buying products, there will be fewer vehicles on the streets and also air pollution can be dramatically decreased.
On the other hand, online purchasing can have some potential drawbacks. Firstly, whenever spenders surfing the internet, their eyes could be bombarded with countless ads which manipulate the spenders into making impulsive purchases. Consequently, costumers might waste their money on low-quality or invaluable goods. Secondly, alongside the fact that you cannot check the quality of the products beforehand, but you also need to wait for delivering services and the process can happen quickly in a few days or longer than a week.
Finally, it is obvious that the advantages of online bargaining seemingly outweigh the disadvantages because convenience and environmental preservation are concerned by most of the world’s population. Nevertheless, both buyers and sellers should find some prospective solution to minimize the considerable disadvantages of virtual shopping.
In conclusion, purchasing online has its own enormous advantages which might surpass the drawback, however, there are needs on restricting virtually shopping’s limitation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90592334495 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17120645831 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644599303136 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9318717068 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.25 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8333333333 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11738280894 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396951147784 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318994744459 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642262314479 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295051094389 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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