Nowadays, a vast majority of adults and children are having more access and capacities to work and obtain knowledge from their home thanks to the advanced technological development which has become more and more affordable and available. In my opinion, I suppose this positive development will bring a wide range of benefits not only for each individual but also for society at large.
To commence, home working and studying benefits personal privacy and convenience. Accordingly, completing requirements at home means that employees have their own comfortable place to come up with ideas and creations, that they could have a more flexible schedule to handle their stuff as well as take good care of themselves and their families. In the same way, children who study at home can be prevented from school pressure or even violence and bullying. Simultaneously, these students will have more time for researching their interests via the internet.
Furthermore, in terms of the social advantage of distance learning and working, there are two essential aspects. Firstly, meeting in distance is the most fundamental demand for social isolation which restricts the Covid pandemic from wider spreading. Secondly, dedicating to work and study from home means fewer crowds on the street, lower traffic congestion, therefore mitigates air and noise pollution. For instance, from the second pandemic wave in Vietnam, students and a remarkable group of personnel are forced to devote themselves from home. At the same time, the Vietnamese Ministry of national resource and environment has reported the reduction of emissions in some industrial cities.
In conclusion, I personally concede the massive significance of distance working and learning either directly in personal facilities or indirectly social benefits.
- The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901 69
- The diagram below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years The evolution of the horse with particular emphasis on the changing foot structure 67
- In the future it seems it will be more difficult to live on the Earth Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live such as Mars To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries 73
- The diagram illustrates how steel rods are manufactured in the furniture industry Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51079136691 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94400233245 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63309352518 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7597828557 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8333333333 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303026192544 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101606980229 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894638063663 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168219430331 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110221163451 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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