Buying things on the Internet such as books, air tickets or groceries , is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give your reasons for you answer and relevant examples from your knowledge or experience
That today many people decide to buy things online is becoming increasingly common. However, there are some drawbacks of shopping in this way. I think that the benefits often outweigh the disadvantages.
There are two major dangers to shopping online. The most common problem is that you buy things that do not fit you. If you want to buy clothes, you will have to try it first. But shopping online does not allow you to that. As a result you may easily buy smaller or bigger size than your body. Furthermore, you can buy the low quality products with high prices. You do not know whether it is a good thing or fake one so that you can easily be deceived.
On the other hand, buying things on the Internet has several outstanding advantages. The main one is its convenience. If you are hungry and thirsty but the weather is raining, just one call, you can have your ready meals or drinks delivered within fifteen minutes. For those who do not how to drive consider that shopping on the Internet is the best invention of all times. Besides, there are a lot of good deals when you buy on the Internet. When you buy books or groceries online, the price of its is often cheaper than you shop it in the shops. And there are always some discount coupons when you buy online. Also, you can make your purchases at any time day or night and from any part of the world.
All in all, in this modern world, I believe that the advantages of using the Internet for shopping such as books, air tickets are greater than the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...online is becoming increasingly common. However there are some drawbacks of shopping in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44649446494 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31647338367 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557195571956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6611495917 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.25 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.55 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306436505008 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903556461336 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043800355317 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187003746217 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023131025216 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 13.0946893788 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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