Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many Cities in the world are now, ' one big traffic jam'.
In the last few decade's Proliferation in the technology, Cars are available for people at affordable price. Due to, Cheap car rates, number of cars drastically increased on the roads. In this essay we will discuss the few reasons of increased cars on roads and how government courage individuals to use public transport.
What are the reasons of increased number of cars on roads? First of all, Car companies compeitite to dominate the market share. They focus on middle society, because more than 60% people have a middle society . So orgnizations develop and build cars, those are easily affordable for this section. Secondly Car companies launch several schemes and loans that help people to buy cars at reasonable price. Moreover, Millions of cars manufactured every year, which leads to increase in market of second hand cars. Second hand cars are 2-3 times cheaper than new cars. Huge part of society happy with second hand car. These ate few causes of increased cars on roads.
How government encourge their individuals to use public transport? Firstly, Govenment improve public transport system of their country, make it reliable and reasonable for public, However, Government increase the road tax and sales tax on cars. Apart from this , Governmet use reward. system like discount in fair, wavier in tax, free travel for free days etc., to encourge individuals to use public transport.
To put it in nutshell, I pen down saying that
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...re than 60% people have a middle society . So orgnizations develop and build cars,...
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Message: Did you mean 'this ate' or 'These ates'?
Suggestion: This ate; These ates
... of society happy with second hand car. These ate few causes of increased cars on roads. ...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'increases'.
Suggestion: increases
...sonable for public, However, Government increase the road tax and sales tax on cars. Apa...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...x and sales tax on cars. Apart from this , Governmet use reward. system like disco...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: System
...Apart from this , Governmet use reward. system like discount in fair, wavier in tax, f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10970464135 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61461083961 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590717299578 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7243543264 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2352941176 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9411764706 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112580624889 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431383145543 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375727913212 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589312750973 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053935689789 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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