It is very obvious that nowadays people prefer to use their own car to drive somewhere more than using public transport, because the technology has increased rapidly and car ownership is very popular now.
First of all, I think there are more advantages of having private car. It helps people to reach their destination where they want to go very fast. And the second benefit is that in own vehicle we feel comfort and safety, nobody will push or step on your feet, as usually happens on the bus. But the first disadvantage of car ownership is that it provide big traffic jam and this problem is very important in every part of the world. Because of people`s preference to private car is much more than public transport, there are a little amount of people on buses or other transport vehicle. However, having a car is not easy for some people because it is enough expensive. And so there are people who think that buses or taxies is more appropriate for them and they use this way do reach their destination.
To solve problem with traffic jam, I think the government should increase the facilities of public transport, such as more comfortable seats or improve the speed of buses and others. Or the government should take high taxes from car users. It can appear people`s wish to go by bus.
To conclude, there are identical amount of people`s preference to elect transport to drive somewhere: by own car or by public vehicle. But I think it will be better if there calm the world instead of one big traffic jam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...an public transport, there are a little amount of people on buses or other transport v...
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Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...us. To conclude, there are identical amount of people's preference to elect tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, i think, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58411577159 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5174280893 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6153846154 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309229204279 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113011883094 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626800613685 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198057300788 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022864061751 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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