Caring for children is an important thing for the society. it is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Indeed, nurturing plays an integral role in the holstic development of children. However, vast majority of people believe that parents should Join the Course in order to take Care of their children. In this essay, Iam largely agreed with This notion that parents ought to take the classes of children training course.
Commencing with the most salient reason behind the Joining Classes is that no one is born as a perfect parents.So, the main benefit to attend parenting Class is that perents will acquire the requisite knowledge to raise that offspring. In other words, traditional Child care skills are not adequate in terms of rearing along with indicating the right path of their Children. In fact through the parents training skills, perents can know, Either about oral or informal insturaction of newborn baby. This might be because,it is hard to understand the movements of children, which they are done in starting age of their life. Whilst, with the help of parenting classes, this phenomenon can be solved. Beside this,it cannot be denied that nowadays most of the families have become nuclear and parents do not have a great experience of nurturing their child because parents also novice in parenting domain.Due to this, parents should enroll in such classes, where the can observe the real experience via diverse child care practical classes. As a result, rearing the Child is hour of need in order to prepare for foreseeable future. So parents should attend the parenting classes.
However, On the other hand, despite taking parenting class, still it rely on parents virtues. To explain it, undoubtedly, since from ancient times parents did not Join parenting classes because children always follow these deeds, which are done by their parents.Another factor is that whether people have to take time off from their hectic schedules in terms of keeping an eye on parenting sessions or have to spend hefty amount of money for paying fees to obtain take care classes.conseuently, it is worst idea to get knowledge through parenting classes.
Im Conclusion, although umpteen are agreed with parenting classes for making easier life of own offspring,still people believe that instead of attending classes people should live in joint families because in big families someone always available for taking care to children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, in fact, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20212765957 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65927125931 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.456925326 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.714285714 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153897018114 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644404040498 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438153935326 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124669435454 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446613128999 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...eir children. In this essay, Iam largely agreed with This notion that parents oug...
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Suggestion: So
...hat no one is born as a perfect parents.So, the main benefit to attend parenting C...
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Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... that perents will acquire the requisite knowledge to raise that offspring. In ot...
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...n terms of rearing along with indicating the right path of their Children. In fac...
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...n of newborn baby. This might be because,it is hard to understand the movements of ...
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...parents also novice in parenting domain.Due to this, parents should enroll in such ...
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...the other hand, despite taking parenting class, still it rely on parents virtues....
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...btain take care classes.conseuently, it is worst idea to get knowledge through parenting...
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... for making easier life of own offspring,still people believe that instead of attendin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, in fact, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20212765957 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65927125931 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.456925326 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.714285714 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153897018114 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644404040498 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438153935326 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124669435454 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446613128999 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.