Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is true that parenting is possibly one of the most significant aspect of our society. I partly agree that attending parenting sessions might be helpful, but it does not guarantee successful upbringing. Also, it should not be by force.
There are a variety of reasons why taking a course might be important for parenting. Firstly, the majority of parents nowadays are young and inexperienced. They may need to take classes so that they can bring up children in the proper way. Secondly, most fathers and mothers hardly have time for their children because of their busy schedules. By learning to properly manage their time and maximizing the little time they have with their children, they can train them appropriately. Finally, children have different behaviours and responses to training. For example, the first child of a family might be more receptive than the last child. Attending courses on child training might help parents know how to handle such cases.
However, I believe parenting courses is not the best approach to proper parenting and should be optional. Parents generally have the right to bring up their children in the way they feel is best and should decide if they want to attend such classes or not. Futhermore making parents attend these courses does not mean that children will turn out to be well behaved. For example, in the west, there are a lot of ideas and ideals of parenting which is applied by several parents. This has however had little or no influence on whom their children become in future.
In conclusion, I believe that teaching parents on how to properly train their child might be helpful to some extent. This, however, should not be compulsory and does not determine whom a child will turn out to be.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 553, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...influence on whom their children become in future. In conclusion, I believe that teach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90235690236 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55534039543 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52861952862 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.980346323 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.8888888889 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278650336365 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09451594445 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511295396044 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180757192461 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102590757138 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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