Cars damage the environment and their use is increasing. Why? How can this be controlled?
It is true that some vehicles, especially cars damage the environment and their use is rising. There are several reasons behind this problem and various solutions should be adopted by government and individuals to enhance this issue.
There are various reasons why cars damage the environment and their use is increasing.
Since, the standard of living of people today is higher than that of previous, some people tend to use more cars in order to serves their life. In fact, in terms of money, cars are now more affordable and convenient for user, which leads to more cars on the roads.
If we use more cars on the roads, exhaust fumes will be discharged out of the environment. In fact, the atmosphere will be pollution by carbon dioxide or other exhaust fumes, which results in environmental degradation.
On the other hand, several measures could be taken to prevent this problem.
By rising taxes on fuel, the government should restrict the cars entering city center. In fact, some countries imposed congested charge for some vehicles, especially cars when its enter on the city center, which reduces traffic jam in the rush hour.
In order to reduce the cars on the roads, the government should have policies to upgrade and expand public transport provision. This means that, the government should improve subsidies for people to have free bus and train passes.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are several reasons for using cars on the roads and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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- People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems Give your opinion 78
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- The table below shows a survey on the preference of difference of different age group in a European country on different TV programme in 2012 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in conclusion, in fact, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50429542559 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9981792717 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.9230769231 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305406244316 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125924088736 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109068136462 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164907431988 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118654450573 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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